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Comment on the essay of admission application

Admission to the university to teach the distinguished gentlemen and ladies: Hello. I am a Chinese living in London, England. I am very interested in knowing that you are holding a "Publishing University" message from a friend in Shanghai, so I am willing to write a letter through thousands of miles. When I was very young, I moved to the UK with my parents. Of course, I study English at school every day. But I can't forget the language of my country by living in another country. Imagine how shameful it is to be a Chinese without knowing the language of your country! Therefore, I insist on studying at a Chinese school in London every Saturday. Due to the hard study over the years, my Chinese level has improved a lot, but it is a pity that this school does not have a deep Chinese course. It teaches only basic and tutoring Chinese lessons, so I have to Free time for self-study. I love the country's long history of culture, history, and language, which prompted me to learn and understand all aspects of Chinese literature. But in the UK, this condition is very poor and cannot satisfy my strong desire. Now, this friend of mine talked to me about the “publishing university” that you held in China. I asked him to try to apply for me. I have read a large number of Chinese books and publications. I have read many Chinese literary classics and read Chinese newspapers every day. In the UK, although there are countless correspondence schools, most of them are taught in business, science and technology, and there are very few liberal arts majors, not to mention Chinese language and literature. I know that my application to the Institute brings a lot of trouble to my husband and ladies, but I believe that you will understand that I am eager to know, and I hope to follow the "Publishing University"! If you want to know me from all aspects, just let me know by letter, I will do my best to answer all your questions. Please accept my heartfelt thanks! Student Zhou Yuxi × Year × Month × Day in London Comments: This is an application for admission to a London Chinese who wants to learn Chinese language and literature. The application first wrote that he had lived in the UK for a long time, and he heard the joy of “posting the university”. In turn, the author wrote the reasons and motivations he wanted to learn Chinese. The full text expresses his eagerness to learn the language of the motherland with the true feelings of a Chinese outside. The article embodies a noble patriotism of the Chinese in a fluent and simple narrative. Love is true and tempting. As far as the full text is concerned, the purpose and reason of the author's application is clear and specific. The accurate use of the language shows that the author has a good writing skills, and the article is not long or short, and can be stopped. The way we ask about some questions, the modest attitude, and the etiquette, in the relaxed writing, let us feel the sincerity of the author.

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