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Take a kite (see picture)


On Saturday, the weather was fine and the bear went to the nearby park to fly a kite. Suddenly, a strong wind blew, the bear's kite looked down, and the bear hurriedly closed the line, but the kite fell to the branch. The bear is very anxious, it pulls the kite line hard, but the kite cannot pull down. The bear went to shake the branches again, the kite still couldn’t shake, and the bear sat on the ground and wowed. At this time, the uncle Giraffe just passed by here and asked: "Why are you crying?" The bear said: "My kite fell on the branch." The giraffe said, "I will help you get it down!" Then, the giraffe stretched his neck. Hold the kite with your mouth, take it carefully and hand it over to the bear. The bear said, "Thank you, uncle Giraffe!" said the giraffe: "No thanks, don't fly a kite in a tree." This article is very well written as an essay writing a picture. The article restores the content on the screen and incorporates some of the imaginations of the small authors so that the articles appear more coherent and vivid. The dialogue in the text is very vivid, and the question and answer strongly promoted the development of the plot. The article has made the image of the uncle Giraffe very successful. The uncle Giraffe is not only enthusiastic, but also careful. When it helps the bear to win the kite, it does not forget to remind the bears not to fly a kite in the tree. In a simple sentence, the character's personality is clearly displayed. This is a highlight of this article. This article does not have a deep meaning. If a small author can tell the story and let the reader get some inspiration, then the article is even better. 2010-6-18 12:22:00

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