Guo Xiaosheng composition comment

You watched it carefully during the autumn tour! The beauty in your eyes is like a picture! If you write your happy mood at the time, how good!

The food you have cooked for your parents is really good. Is there a chance for the teacher to have a good meal?

Your article wakes up the sleeping earth like a spring thunder, adding a new green to the new day..."

"The teacher once said to you, as long as you do something with your heart, you must succeed. No? Now you can write a good word, you are timid and timid, you dare to speak in class, for your The progress teacher is happy. In the future, carry forward the advantages of politeness and love of labor, study, continue to work hard, and write carefully, then you will achieve better results, I believe you will do it!"

"When you give your "masterpiece" - a beautiful painting to the teacher to appreciate, the teacher is really proud of you, your mother's mood must be as excited as the teacher! This painting is a lot of effort It’s done, right? Tell you, learning is like painting. As long as we work hard, the harvest will be even bigger.”

"You compare the "long rope" in the tug-of-war competition to the "children who can't decide". It's too good! The game has failed, but your composition has been very successful! If the end of the composition turns your disappointment into a short A few short revelations are even better!

How a child you are passionate! How good you are to feel the feelings of life, even though you are a bit timid about the composition, but you grasp the true meaning of the composition - I write my love. As long as you write your true feelings, the teacher must like you very much.

You are a smart and sensitive child. You have a happy family. You also love your home. But when your family has an unpleasant thing, don’t you love it? Use your intelligence and use your Love to summon the happiness of the family!

In your pen, how beautiful autumn is! The teacher saw the high and deep blue sky from your composition, and saw the golden rice fields, the northern geese of Nanfei, and the yellow leaves that floated. All this is all. I feel the beauty and magic of autumn. How much I want to say to the fall: Autumn! Turning decay into a magical fall, how beautiful you are to make your students' compositions!

When the teacher opens your text, you can always hear a cry, it turns out to be punctuation, because you don't pay much attention to them. You think about it, when the teacher also despise your composition like you despise punctuation, do you not cry?

Your composition can describe the autumn field in detail, indicating that you are a child who is good at observing. But what a beautiful season in autumn, autumn is the harvest season, autumn is a colorful season, the teacher really hopes to feel that beautiful and poetic autumn in your article!

The author uses psychological descriptions and action description techniques to express his own nervous and fearful psychology.

Tailored. The ink and ink are concentrated, and the details are slightly detailed. The language is concise and general. The theme is positive, the beginning is concise, and the ending is powerful. Use suspense to make the plot twist and tear. The material is typical.

This article adopts the first person's writing method, which makes it have great advantages. It plays a good role in shaping the character and the performance center. It is natural and credible to read. The thinking is clear and the rhythm is bright.

The process of this article is written concretely, clearly and clearly. The author has added appropriate psychological descriptions at the same time as the narrative, fully expressing...

The article uses the child's language narrative, looks natural, simple, like a clear spring. Ending the topic, played a finishing touch.

The article is lively and vivid, and the truth is true. In particular, the article on the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.

Narrative things are clear, verbs can be used correctly, metaphors are used, and vivid. Suggestions can be educated after reading.

The simple and natural childlike spirit is reflected in the text, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.

This article expresses the sincere appreciation for the beautiful heart with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language, and novel and unique writing.

The main advantages of this paper are three: 1 This article can closely follow the topic requirements, complete the process of .... 2, the structure is rigorous, the focus is prominent. 3, the language is simple, concise, smooth, the beginning and end are very natural and accurate.

The beginning is simple and natural, the structure is clear, the psychological description is true, reflecting the author's good language control ability.

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Although the article is short, the narrative is vivid. The description is exquisite, the life is full of flavor, and the words are sentenced accurately.

At the end of the article, the sentence of the center is revealed, it is a pen of clearing, the language of generalization is short and powerful.

Through careful observation, the appropriate language was used to describe it in a vivid way. The article is short but not monotonous, and the language is popular but not funny.

It is a major feature of this article to carefully and delicately describe the language, demeanor, movements, etc. of the characters. The end is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are exhausted.

The article will be written in detail, revealing the warmth of the sun between the lines, so that the theme of the article naturally sublimates to a higher level.

Music is beautiful, and the language of this article is equally beautiful. The poetry of the general language dreams, how beautiful!

The "reading" and "sense" of the article are closely related. The case narrates the action, and at the beginning, it touches the heart and has a real feeling.

The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is powerful and has a sound, and it is very exciting to read.

Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, and the emotions are rich and real. It is very interesting to read. It uses a lot of spoken language in life to make the article more natural and close to the family. Ending with a clear, meaningful and meaningful meaning .

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The examples are vivid and specific, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a caring person of life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and written.

The full-text language is smooth, the text is stretched freely, naturally free and easy, and it is a more successful work.

The full text is hearty and full of enthusiasm, with joy and expectation in mind, sincere and touching.

The article has a strong sense of reality, strong stereoscopic effect, strong readability and strong interest. With a keen social insight, it reflects the dark side of the reality with fairy tales, and depicts a greedy mortal phase in vivid language, which is called a three-pointer.

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The full text narrative is concentrated, not sloppy, the language is simple and smooth, and the feelings are really touching.

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The language and movement of the object set off the ideological quality of the character. The article imagines reasonable and reasonable, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.

The language is simple, the center is clear, the concept is reasonable, and the level of writing is clear.

It is indeed very valuable to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly, which left a deep impression on people.

The article is head and tail, the center is clear and the structure is complete.

The article is well-founded, persuasive, highlights the personality of the characters, the contextual transition is natural, the organization is clear, the first and last care, the end of the topic, highlighting the central idea.

The author observes carefully, describes the delicate, vivid and lively, and the expression is full of new ideas.

The full text language is simple, the structure is natural.... The structure of the article is rigorous, and the first and last echoes.

The language is humorous, the plot arrangement is lively and twisted, and the echoes at the beginning and the end are clever. The length of this article is short, but the content is vivid and specific, the passage is clear, the language is simple and easy to understand.

In the text, a series of verbs that express the movements of the characters are used accurately, and the tactics are well applied.

This article adopts the first person's writing method, which makes it have great advantages. It plays a good role in shaping the character and the performance center. It is natural and credible to read. The thinking is clear and the rhythm is bright.

The process of this article is written concretely, clearly and clearly. The author has added appropriate psychological descriptions at the same time as the narrative, fully expressing...

The article uses the child's language narrative, looks natural, simple, like a clear spring. Ending the topic, played a finishing touch.

The article is lively and vivid, and the truth is true. In particular, the article on the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.

Narrative things are clear, verbs can be used correctly, metaphors are used, and vivid. Suggestions can be educated after reading.

The simple and natural childlike spirit is reflected in the text, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.

This article expresses the sincere appreciation for the beautiful heart with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language, and novel and unique writing.

The main advantages of this paper are three: 1 This article can closely follow the topic requirements, complete the process of .... 2, the structure is rigorous, the focus is prominent. 3, the language is simple, concise, smooth, the beginning and end are very natural and accurate.

The beginning is simple and natural, the structure is clear, the psychological description is true, reflecting the author's good language control ability.

The characteristics of this essay can be summarized as intimate, warm, and timeless.

The text is... fresh and lively, cheerful and bright. The childlike heartbeat between the lines makes the article have vitality.

The article presents the reader with a rich imagination and a colorful language.

The article is concise and clear, and the language is plain and simple.

The author's observations are meticulous, the imagination is rich, and the use of anthropomorphic, metaphorical and other techniques makes the lively and lively, which has aroused the reader's interest.

Borrowing the scenery, the things are very good.

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... requires a fictional story to express a philosophy.

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The use of foreshadowing is a major feature of the article. The first paragraph of the article has made an excellent foundation for the development of the whole story. This concept is very clever and can be borrowed.

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The imagination is rich and very innovative. At the beginning, I introduce myself and introduce the following. In addition, the language of the article is concise and concise, and the style is humorous and mischievous.

The article is not long, but the process description is very clear, the character's activity description is also concrete, authentic, lively and interesting, the full text is compact, complete, and the writing is smoother.

The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's cleverness, wit, full of family life, and fluent and lively.

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The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is full of twists and turns, as if bringing the reader into the happy paradise, it is eye-opening. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

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Although it is a trivial matter, the author has described the sound and the indispensable pens at the end, which better highlights the subject of the article.

The portrayal of the details, on the contrary, reveals the inner world of the character, which is the success of this article.

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This article draws on real life, the selection of materials is appropriate, very innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transition, interesting, and readable.

The full text is fast-paced, the language is fresh, and it is always full of humor and humor, and it is fun to read.

The vivid and detailed narrative of... is a day's characteristic of this article, and it also reflects the keenness and meticulousness of the author's observation. This is a major element of the success of the article.

The content of this paper is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

This article is a relatively mature narrative work. The article shows the whole process of the experiment in an accurate and smooth language. It is ups and downs, and the fun is interesting. The small author observes carefully and the narrative is orderly.

The description of the experimental phenomena can be cut to the point, detailed and comprehensive. The article reflects the interesting and intellectual nature of the natural sciences, and it is interesting to read.

At the beginning of the article, the confession is clearly clear, and it plays the role of the full text of the generalist. At the end of the article, there are several words that show the author's lofty ideals and firm confidence in exploring the mysteries of science, and inspiring people.

The three major successes of this article: First, pay attention to the selection of the most beautiful pieces to write, followed by accurate words, the third article is compact.

This article revolves around... this central branch material, the language is accurate, vivid, vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific, without losing a successful work.