How to modify your composition

The ability to modify is one of the basic abilities of writing. Modification is an indispensable process in the writing process. It is often said that “the text is not ruined,” and the composition is changed, not written.

Everyone knows that the composition is almost half of the language test, and our students don't pay much attention to the revision when they write. After they finish writing, they are finished, and think that the revision is a matter of the language teacher. This view is wrong and harmful. Will not modify the article, do not understand the requirements and methods of modification, will hinder expression, is not conducive to the improvement of the level of composition; do not pay attention to the modification or lack of ability to modify, this will directly affect the performance of candidates, so we must make a group of composition changes Value.

Below, I will talk about what should be done when modifying the composition:

First: Focus on the whole article, modify from the whole to the local

As soon as I mentioned the essay revision, some students may think that this is simple. It is not to see if there are any typos in the text. Therefore, a pen is buried in the modification of the words, but the mistakes in the overall composition are not noticed. This is the inversion of the present, and is not conducive to the improvement of the composition level.

In the face of the well-prepared essays, we should first browse the whole, starting from the overall situation, whether the center of the text is clear, whether it is new, whether the selected materials are tightly centered around the center, and then consider the overall framework of the composition: see the article Whether the structure is compact, whether the layout is reasonable or not, whether the transition is natural, and then consider the choice of sentence patterns and temper the words. Let's analyze a short paragraph to see if it is based on the whole situation and whether the center is clear. Example:

It can be seen that the chain word sentence is necessary. If the word is too bad, you can't write a beautiful article. In fact, no one of the famous writers in ancient and modern China and foreign countries is struggling in the face of the difficulties of the words. In ancient China, there was a word "吟an, a few roots must be cut off", "for the sake of stability, to be half-cold", etc. legend. The modern writer Lao She said: "We must work hard to unearth the potential of language, so that our own words can be both interesting, vocal, and radiant." All this tells us that if you want to write a good article, you have to work hard on the tempered words to effectively improve the composition level.

Second: first seek for "clear communication", then seek "work skill"

The so-called "clear" means that the words are concise, and the words and phrases that are dispensable are all removed. You do not need words that you do not understand, and you do not create words. The so-called "communication" means that the text is fluent from the word, what is said first, what is said later, arranged in good order, and the text is reasonably coherent and mutually responsive. So how do you achieve "clear" and "pass"? I think we can do it from the following points;

The sentence should be simple and complete. When writing, try not to use less complicated sentences, try to use short sentences, and when you modify, you should see if there are any sick sentences in the text, so that each sentence can accurately explain a meaning.

Pay attention to the use of punctuation and clear the sentence reading.

Many students usually don't pay much attention to the punctuation. When they use the composition, they don't have a punctuation. They only use one dot to indicate the pause. This kind of practice is very bad. It is necessary to know that the punctuation marks are like the five senses of a person. They must be clear and clear. Never use the punctuation.

In addition, you should also pay attention to the format of punctuation. In particular, the first cell at the beginning of each line cannot use punctuation, comma, comma, etc., and ellipsis, dash, etc. should occupy two squares. Although these are very subtle places, we can't. Neglect.

In fact, the beauty of the article does not lie in how many modifiers are used, how many famous sentences are used, but whether the words are fluent and whether the performance is reasonable or not. Therefore, we should first seek for "clearance" when modifying the composition. The text is succinct and clear, and on this basis, the language is properly processed and polished. Touch up is to write vividly.

Third: vivid, mainly refers to the image, natural, not hard, not dry. There are many ways to write articles vividly, such as metaphors, anthropomorphisms, rankings, etc., or let us analyze a piece of text and see how to make it more vivid.

Fourth: When making changes, you should pay attention to keeping the surface clean and tidy.

Due to time constraints, essays and test essays in special time limits, the possibility of rewriting rewriting is not great, sometimes there is no re-transcription time, so be careful not only when writing, but also when modifying Apply a big wipe, a big shift. You can change the place that you can't change, you don't have to change it. If you can't change it, you should gently cross out the original words and words, and correct it in the blank between the two lines, and try to keep the roll surface clean and tidy, because the roll face gives the first Impression, handwriting, scribbled, dirty surface, people are bored, how can you carefully read? The fonts are correct and the rolls are neat and tidy, but they are pleasing to the eye and at first sight.

In addition, some small places should also be given high priority. If you don't write or write typos, you don't need to make punctuation, etc. If you make mistakes in these small places, you will feel a bad appetite and it will be difficult to get a subjective impression.